I am not a poet(poetry thursday)
Poetry
Makes me laugh
What is it
Catching my thoughts in solitude
Or just whiling away time in verses
Frankly much of poetry disgusts me
I have no patience to read abstract lines
Detailing personal thoughts and idiosyncrasies
Oh yes! I love penning down my thoughts
Whenever I can
And it’s quite pleasant to learn
Others find them interesting
But I cannot stand reading a whole poem
Even mine
As I move on
My truths move on
There is no life left in written words
They served me just fine
While I wrote them
They were just means
To vent fleeting emotions
But I am not a poet
I am just a simple man
Looking for some serenity
In this otherwise chaotic world
posted by White Square at
4:16 pm
10 Comments:
hi abhay! nice poetry you composed.
thank you for visiting bag-of-words weeks ago! nice comment too :-)
greetings from indonesia.
Hay,
Good poem there. More than a poem, I thought it is a soul searching.
I generally like prose than poetry, where things can say in more details. I know peots want abstracts. But I liked the beauty poets put their thoughts.
I only wish I get those beauty to put something in prose.
Best regards,
Keep in touch.
Paul
I beg to differ,,,
U have emotions,sensibility,
thoughts and word power to express them..
after writing them ,u don't like to read becoz u want to go ahead with other ideas....
One can relate to ur words/thoughts so u r a poet!!!
sometimes poetry, is like fine wine, with age it gets better! I mean I Love to read my poetry later to seeeeeeeeeee what I was feeling at the time I wrote it! Save your poetry Abhay! I like this one very much! You are too impatient sometimes maybe! lol Be still and get to KNOW yourself! You are like a young colt, always running
Beautiful, Abhay! You have such talent.
Hello Abhay,
Sorry it took me so long to leave a comment, I've been so busy, but I have been reading. I just love this poem (can I call it that if you're not a poet?). The last three lines are exactly how I see it, very nice. Take care,
Bob
..and I am a simple poet looking...
Cheers
Glenn
A cut rose is still beautiful and captivating even though it is dead. It's always the relationship between things that is alive. I love this poem, Abhay!
I love this post! match well my feelings about poetry: I like it, but not with many images on a line......
Thank you all so much! Your words mean a lot to me and I love your comments whatever they say. The issue is not whether I am a poet or not but I write in verses and you find them meaningful or of some value and there is a flow of ideas and thoughts amomg us. This flow is the most vital of all as we are learning from each other and growing everyday...
cheers
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