Thursday, 29 June 2006


A flicker of light is lit up
While your lips touch mine
Eternity begins
Death dies
While we sleep like children
In each others embrace,
Telling stories
Singing lullabies,
Resting heads into each other
And getting lost
Dancing in harmony together
On four feet
Round and round in circles.
What a feeling to touch,
To feel you breathing,
The only sign that we live
The rhythm of your heartbeat,
Sings the melodies of eternity
Propelling the eternal ship of life
Through the deep reaches of the universe
On the path lit by zillion stars


Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

I like the way this grows and grows to universal proportions from an initial flicker of light.

29/6/06 4:26 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Than you so much Glenn!
Even I am amazed at your discovery.It just happened naturally to me.

29/6/06 4:50 pm  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

A spark
Life from death
breathing , pulsing
endless circles
burning must have been your subonscious singing.


29/6/06 6:38 pm  
Blogger ozymandiaz said...

Eternal kisses...yummy

29/6/06 6:59 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Glenn,
Yes I do not remember as i wrote it long time back but yes your verses come very close to that.
Thank you so much Glenn..

Hi Ozy,
Eternal kisses or through kisses to eternity I do not know but yes something like that...

29/6/06 7:15 pm  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

Abhay.. I only just wrote that verse as a quick summary/response to your wonderful words.( I do that sometimes :) I wouldn't consider them my creation at all!

30/6/06 1:26 am  

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