Home coming(Poetry Thursday)
An immense joy fills me
Within,
Finding you
after years wait
You fill
The hole
That was empty
Since years
I have been
Craving for
Your
Home coming
Within,
Finding you
after years wait
You fill
The hole
That was empty
Since years
I have been
Craving for
Your
Home coming
posted by White Square at
2:00 pm
15 Comments:
abhay, that poem would make me very glad I came home, no matter the reason I was gone..very intersting picture..like it and your poem..take care..m
Hi Madd!
Thank you so much!
I am glad that you liked it!
Cheers!
Hi Brian,
your quick wit is praiseworthy!
Can't agree with you more!
Welcome to I&U!
hi, i think your poem though short is very meaningful, heartwarming. Thanks for sharing!
And this poetry isn't dark anymore as well.
Good show Abhay!
I love this poem because it’s relevant to everyone and what ever or who ever fill us up…..the passion behind the words is apparent! Good job!
Hi Elle & Giggles,
Welcome to I&U,
Here you would find many offerings that are meaningful and for all of us! Poems are very special way of sharing our common feelings that bind the whole world together.I wonder at times what if there were no seasons, what if there were no birds, what if there were no colors, what if there were no stars in the sky, what if there were no rivers and waterfalls, what if there were no flowers, what if there were no friends...I think its the wholeness of life in this universe that makes life such a wonderful experience! I feel at times that one moment of bliss is enough to give a meaning to life despite all sorrows as one drop of elixir is enough to render immortality, as one drop of honey is enough to take away galons of bitter gaul.
Dear Susan,
There is always light after darkness..i do not believe in the never-ending dark tunnels. Thank you so much for being here.
cheers
Hi Abhay k
My wife and self have both just read your lovely poem. Succinctly put, beautiful phrasing and the photo of shadows marries well with the evocative feelings of hope and joy!!
Best wishes
Dear Lindsay,
First of all I would thank the lady for her interest in reading my poem and then you for showing her I&U. I am so grateful to the Almighty that he gave me the ability to engage you all and say something that is beautiful and at the same time conveys some meaning...Thank you so much!
Cheers!
loved the picture, and words too!
thank you so much Rachana!
Beautiful homecoming....the hole has disappeared in completeness.
Hi Shanin,
very beautifully said...the hole has really dissapeared in completeness!
Thank you so much...for your heart warming comment.
Lovely my friend. I thank you for stopping my blog and am glad I came to yours, You are very talented. Keep writing
love-bd
Hi bd,
Welcome to I&U,
Its really great to have you here!
Many thanks for your encouraging words!They mean a lot to me and certainly help me go on...and on..
Cheers!
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