Wednesday, 4 October 2006

You & me (Part-II)



What stays with me
Is me
You came and went away
What stayed with me
Is me

When we met
We thought
It’s for ever
Then sadly one day
We had to part away

Strangers became friends
Friends became strangers
It all happened with time
It all happened in this life


Could you say
I moved away
Or you were left behind
may be it’s just the trick of time

You and me
Time-travelers
Crossed paths
Then each on one’s own

A sweet fragrance
From memories' garden
Keeps mesmerizing
Since then

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8 Comments:

Blogger brian said...

Hello,

Thanks for stopping by my blog the other day. I like your poetry very much.

5/10/06 1:55 am  
Anonymous rachana said...

//What stays with me
Is me// loved that line. amazing!!!

5/10/06 9:38 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Brian,
welcome to I&U,
am so glad to know that you liked my poems...
thank you

Hi Rachana,
Amazingly thats my favorite line too...
thank you so much!
best..

5/10/06 12:06 pm  
Anonymous madd said...

hhmm..."Strangers became friends
Friends became strangers"...so true and aways so sad to me as I find this such a waste of each other and ourselves...take care..M

6/10/06 1:38 am  
Blogger rch said...

Hi abhay, very nice look at relationships. Ah that sweet fragrance can be captivating at times. Excellent as was part 1, best wishes,

Bob

12/10/06 1:22 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Dear Bob,
Thank you so much...its always great to have you here!
I completely agree with you on that sweet fragrance!
cheers!

12/10/06 12:50 pm  
Blogger writerwoman said...

So romantic! It explored all the classic feelings of separated soul mates.

16/10/06 8:49 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Sara,
your words are so soothing...i love the phrase "Classic feelings" and "separated soulmates". This is a great comment and I want to thank you for this.

17/10/06 10:31 pm  

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