Sunday, 24 September 2006

Beauty Burns


Your beauty burns me
While you look so calm
I lose control
My anger shoots up
It’s impossible to stand you
It’s impossible to resist
I don’t know what’s happened
But omens do not feel right
May be one day
Victory will touch my feet
When I would be angry no more
Just looking at you
When I would learn to accept
“Let it be, just let it be”
When a smile would flicker
on my face
When I would stop noticing you
in the crowd
For now
Your beauty burns me

9 Comments:

Anonymous rachana said...

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"When you would be angry no more
Just looking at beauty
When you would learn to accept
“Let it be, just let it be”
When a smile would flicker
on your face
even then you should not stop noticing beauty
in the crowd
For then
the beauty will soothe you......"

sorry abhay,using your lines and changing them..but i wanted to tell exactly that!!

24/9/06 2:20 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Rachana,
Thank you so much....that's one thing I'll never get tired of...
Cheers

24/9/06 11:24 pm  
Blogger paris parfait said...

Lovely poem, Abhay - showing the pull of mixed emotions.

25/9/06 3:05 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Thank you so much Tara,
Its a pleasure reading your soothing words!
Happy journey to Spain!

25/9/06 11:54 am  
Blogger Susan Abraham said...

A very sensitive of hidden love.

26/9/06 9:13 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Susan,
Welcome to I&U,
I truly appreciate your understanding...thanks for your kind words!

26/9/06 1:51 pm  
Blogger Gary said...

Passion!

26/9/06 7:41 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Yes Gary, a great deal of ....thats surprises me even...

27/9/06 11:43 am  
Blogger RomanceWriter said...

Let it be, just let it be

Love that line.

and this one

Your beauty burns me


very sensual connotations.

1/10/06 8:31 pm  

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