Friday, 8 September 2006

Since ever, for ever?!















Mental barriers
Obstructed thoughts
The rising tide of anger
Engulfs the wholesome peace
On the shores of life

Mind stretches far
But comes bouncing back
Hitting the barrier walls
Those seem to stand there
Since ever, for ever?!

7 Comments:

Blogger Paige said...

Thank you for commenting at my place.
You have some very nice pieces here.

8/9/06 6:29 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Thank you so much Paige!

8/9/06 7:33 pm  
Blogger Natalie said...

I like this piece abhay. It rings true that anger can be so difficult to shift... we've all been there i think. You are clearly very into your poetry. It feels great to publish it, and have others appreciate it.

Thanks for your comment
Natalie

8/9/06 8:38 pm  
Blogger ozymandiaz said...

Powerful emotions can truly deter reason to be sure.

8/9/06 9:17 pm  
Blogger rachana said...

nice words with wonderful picture!!

8/9/06 11:29 pm  
Blogger paris parfait said...

Very insightful poem, Abhay.

9/9/06 4:09 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Natalie,
welcome to I&U,
thank you so much for your hearty comment!
Dear Ozy,
this poem is not about anger though anger is just the part of it. I agree with you that anger truly deters the reason!

Hi Rachana,
thank you so much. I am glad you liked the picture.

Dear Tara,
Thank you so much !

9/9/06 12:31 pm  

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