Thursday, 2 November 2006

Life! (Poetry Thursday)

I know the event of the departure

So I would cherish you deeply

Go into your depth

Feel your breath

Get a part of your magical touch

Oh dear!

You have been such an inspiration

So far!


Anonymous brian said...


Life so far indeed! Love the poem and your pic.

2/11/06 6:53 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Thanks Brian!

2/11/06 8:00 pm  
Anonymous Dennis said...

"So I would cherish you deeply" What an excellent thought - the feelings which accompany that phrase are wonderful.

2/11/06 8:16 pm  
Blogger Susan Abraham said...

As always, beautiful, Abhay.

2/11/06 8:24 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Dennis,
Welcome to I&U,
Thank you so much for your kind words!

Hi Susan,
Thank you so much!

2/11/06 8:27 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

"Feel your breath" Such passion and intimacy evoked through three small words... very beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

2/11/06 8:28 pm  
Blogger Beloved dreamer said...

Ah, Abhay, what a wonderful poem. You have the makings of a great poet with in you.


2/11/06 11:22 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Robin,
welcome to I&U,
Thank you so much for such soothing comment...I am so happy that you liked my poem..and i am so touched to know that it evokes such passion and intimacy...

Hi bd,
thats a very encouraging comment and I would remember you for it for a long tim...thank you so much bd!


3/11/06 12:44 am  
Blogger twitches said...

I love the exclamations at the end. You can almost hear the poet sighing.

3/11/06 3:36 am  
Blogger michelle said...

Thank you for your comment.

Paris is magical isn't it? I was just there last year, and already I'm anticipating my return.

And what a beautiful opening line.

3/11/06 6:08 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Twitches!
thank you so much for your understanding and beautiful words!

Hi Michelle!
Yes Michelle...Paris is magical and so is Moscow!
Thank you so much for your words!

3/11/06 1:35 pm  
Blogger twilightspider said...

I love the opening lines, they are so intimate that I just want to wrap myself in them.

4/11/06 12:30 am  
Anonymous madd said...

abhay..I loved ..go into your depth, feel your breath get a part of your magical touch..such intimacy to carry with you..anticiaption of what mote there is to come..lovely..take care and thanks for stopping by..m

4/11/06 11:29 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Twilightspider,
Welcome to I&U,
many thanks for such an intimate comment...would love to hear more from you...

Hi Madd...
thank you so much Madd...I really love reading your magical words...
See u soon here!

4/11/06 5:07 pm  
Blogger Gary said...

Very nice - and I like the hat you're wearing in the photo!

5/11/06 7:03 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Gary,
Thank you so much...It is always so nice to read your words!

5/11/06 11:37 am  
Blogger M. Shahin said...

"Go into your depth

Feel your breath"

Wonderful descriptions that make the reader want to plumb the depths you convey. It is wonderful the way these words are expressed.

9/11/06 1:05 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Shanin,
Those words come from my heart when I look at life. Thank you so much for your kind words. I am so glad that you liked this poem.

9/11/06 1:17 pm  

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