Wednesday, 7 June 2006

I live this life

I live this life
Tormented by ambition
Torn apart
By hurricanes of harsh realities

I live this life
Engulfed by earthly desires
Slowly dissolving in death-nectar
Calmly being claimed

I live this life
Saddened being alone
Amidst the crowd
Shouting in silence

I live this life
By the vicissitudes of fate
Yet feeling blessed at times

I live this life
Staring at my past
That lies ahead
Dictating my fate

I live this life
Loving losing
Losing loving
Never getting tired


Blogger Travis Jay Morgan said...

Through this poem you express your loneliness, yet you are appreciative and content with your cards and understand lifes challenges. "Engulfed by earthly desires" shows your understanding of wordly attachments which ultimately results in our suffering. "Condemned to fate" shows your understanding that we are just reacting to the actions before us. Your ending "never getting tired" appears to display your strength to carry on your struggle to awareness and understanding. Overall, there are several thoughts in this poem which reflect your feelings and thoughts. I could relate.

7/6/06 1:37 am  
Blogger paris parfait said...

This is such a fantastic poem - so poignant and beautiful about all the highs and lows of life. Also a fantastic image accompanying the poem. Well done!

7/6/06 5:12 am  
Blogger J.Valentine said...

I love the image you have with your poem. Your blogspot site is amazing...thank you for sharing.

7/6/06 6:09 am  
Blogger xanjukta said...

Where did you get that picture? Did you take it? I'm at a loss for words at your poetry, seems too personal for me to write commenst on it... but i can sense how you feel...

7/6/06 10:28 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Travis,
I do not how to thank you for your such indepth understanding of my utterances...perhaps words won't be enough..I must link you if you kindly allow me..

Hi Tara,
Thank you so much for your true understanding of the sense I wanted to convey..and your comments are vital for my writings..

Hi J. Valentine,
Welcome to I&U,
I am glad you enjoy being here..Thank you so much for visiting me...
best wishes!

Hi Sanjukta,
Thank you so means that I am writing well if you can feel what I want to say...the photograph is from a friend..
with love..

7/6/06 12:35 pm  
Blogger DA said...

Auch.., I can totally relate to that Abhay.

10/6/06 1:12 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Wow! so are back DA..nice to see you at I&U..

10/6/06 1:26 am  

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