Thursday, 8 June 2006

Senryu(Poetry Thursday)












Feel! Do feel the pain
That’s the beginning of the change
The fight must go on!


(Senryu is a Japanese poetry in 5+7+5 format)
You can read all my poems at Enlightenment

12 Comments:

Blogger Tammy said...

Beautiful photo and words to live by :)

8/6/06 9:08 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Thanks Tammy!

9/6/06 1:40 am  
Blogger wendylou who? said...

really great, very true, universal

well done

9/6/06 3:58 am  
Blogger AscenderRisesAbove said...

what a powerful image and words!!

9/6/06 7:55 am  
Blogger Scheherazade said...

You're my pureheart Abhay.

That's what I've titled your link on my site.

9/6/06 12:22 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi,
Scheherazade,
Thank you so much...I am honored by this name...you truly understand me. I am delighted to know that i have an understanding friend..
best wishes!
abhay

9/6/06 2:27 pm  
Blogger Colorsonmymind said...

I like this format- and the words are powerful and just what I needed today!

9/6/06 4:52 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Thank You so much
Welcome to I&U,
Colorsonmymind...its feels great to know that you got here something you needed ..

9/6/06 5:31 pm  
Blogger Suzie said...

I live with chronic pain and yes, I do feel it. I haven't really explored it too much, been running from it mostly. I will consider really feeling it. I love transformation.

Thanks for visiting my blog!

10/6/06 12:21 am  
Blogger DA said...

My Moscow friend. Unfortunately very true again..(but beautiful :-)

10/6/06 1:08 am  
Blogger paris parfait said...

Well done, Abhay! And what a beautiful photo to accompany your poem!

10/6/06 1:25 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Spooky Suzie,
Welcome to I&U..and thank you so much for thinking about my poem and what it tries to say...actually here by pain i meant the pain from the rigidities, authoritarianism, injustice, a sense of being deprived of something or the other..

Hi DA,
you are so honest in your comments all the times...

Hi Tara,
Somehow i am managing so far to do it...thank you so much..

10/6/06 1:35 am  

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