Three Senryus for you and me
Without you can’t live a day
My heart craves for your company; but
I need some time alone
What makes us go on?
When you and I are so different
Perhaps we need each other!
We need to talk more
Because we need to understand each other
Much better than we ever did
(Senryu is a Japanese poetry with 5+7+5 format...
the difference between Haiku and Senryu is that
Haiku is for natural themes while Senryu for human...
though somewhere they both merge)
posted by White Square at
11:16 pm
8 Comments:
thank you for the lovely lesson in Senryu, Abhay.
ochen horoshow!
Hi Scheherazade,
Cpacibo Bolshoi!
Ya ochean rad chitach bac komment...cpacibo!
You taught me something new I don't rember having heard of Senryu...
Thank You so much Harmonyinline..even I learnt the difference a few weeks ago...
cheers
Lovely - I wasn't aware of Senryu, but then again, there's so little I know about the Japanese culture.
I just came across Haiku first and then Senryu and then the difference between the two...
thank you so much Tara..
Great Images there but I think you got it wrong! Both Haikus and Senryus follow the 5-7-5 syllable patterns not words!
There has to be irony at the end!
Hope you don't mind my saying so!
Hi Gautami,
welcome to I&U,
thank you so much for your valuable suggestion...I think you are right and I am on the learning curve...
And I welcome your comments..minding..not at all..far from it..
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