Monday, 13 November 2006

Break the spell


I sit
And look at you
In silence
Take me away

from your magical spell
Let my eyes rest

for a while
Let me have some sleep
Oh! But that’s not good anymore
Even my dreams are full of you
Come to me O' my savior

Break the spell

14 Comments:

Blogger rachana said...

Just one word- "wonderful"!!

13/11/06 8:17 am  
Blogger bohemiantroubadour said...

Fate loves the fearless.

13/11/06 11:23 am  
Anonymous madd said...

abhay..may I just say I couldn't stop smiling when I read this..and that I am happy for you, it just shines off the 'page'...enjoy my friend..you make so many of my own wonderful memories swim to the surface and pop in a little bubble of remembrance, nice..thanks..:)m

13/11/06 7:47 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Dear Rachana,
Thank you so much for your one amazing word!I am so happy!
Hi bohemian!
welcome to I&U,
thank you so much for your witty comment..

Dear Madd..
many thanks for such a lovely comment...friend i truly enjoy reading your comments..keep on with it..

13/11/06 10:00 pm  
Blogger Gary said...

Lovely - it can be seen as a romantic sentiment...or a spiritual sentiment... or both!

14/11/06 10:48 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

dear Gary,
Thank you so much for such insight into my thoughts!
Cheers!

14/11/06 1:33 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Dear fucked up poet.....I hit on your blog by a quirk of fate and I wish to use this oppurtunity to advice you strongly to stop writing this crap that you call poetry...its just an indulgence that your cretin sized brain allows you...dont you have any fucking sense of aesthetics.

I am amazed that not One of your frens ever pointed this blistering fact to you...that your poems are like turds circulating when you run the flush. <------Now for a change this line or thought ot image is poetry.....

15/11/06 6:13 am  
Blogger writerwoman said...

How pretty!

15/11/06 9:13 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Dear anonymous,
Welcome to I&U,
many thanks to that quirk of fate that brought you here...it seems now that it is you I have been waiting for since so long. Your comment is so special to me because it is different than any other comment my poems have gathered so far. I trully appreciate your hidden love and care in your rather strong words for a budding writer and poet. I would certainly strive to write better and better with the passage of time. I have no control over the size of my brain but I can always strive to do better.
Thank you so much for taking out your time and writing a comment.

Hi Writerwoman,
Thank you so much for your pretty words!

15/11/06 1:05 pm  
Blogger lindsaylobe said...

Lovely poem - I agree with gary -romantic and or spiritual, but in any event I think you are there , one in all and no need to break the spell.
best wishes

15/11/06 4:54 pm  
Blogger madd said...

abhay..nice comeback..what always amazes me is that they don't even have the courage of their convictions to use there name..hhmm tells you a lot about them in not doing so..m

16/11/06 1:14 am  
Anonymous KD DEWAL said...

Good poetry- Roots. keep it up and

I appreciate your patience in reply to anonymous, its not common.

Sign of a good diplomat.

Eating air and drinking dust in shipra's room.

16/11/06 5:28 pm  
Blogger paris parfait said...

Abhay, beautiful love poem. And your diplomacy in dealing with someone who makes rude remarks without divulging his or her identity is a lesson for all.

21/11/06 2:47 am  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Tara,
thank you so much! long time..how have you been?!
In life you have to deal with such people sometimes and I thought that is the best way!
Cheers!

22/11/06 1:42 pm  

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