Senryu(Poetry Thursday)
Feel! Do feel the pain
That’s the beginning of the change
The fight must go on!
(Senryu is a Japanese poetry in 5+7+5 format)
You can read all my poems at Enlightenment
posted by White Square at
7:36 pm
Thursday, 8 June 2006
Feel! Do feel the pain
That’s the beginning of the change
The fight must go on!
(Senryu is a Japanese poetry in 5+7+5 format)
You can read all my poems at Enlightenment
12 Comments:
Beautiful photo and words to live by :)
Thanks Tammy!
really great, very true, universal
well done
what a powerful image and words!!
You're my pureheart Abhay.
That's what I've titled your link on my site.
Hi,
Scheherazade,
Thank you so much...I am honored by this name...you truly understand me. I am delighted to know that i have an understanding friend..
best wishes!
abhay
I like this format- and the words are powerful and just what I needed today!
Thank You so much
Welcome to I&U,
Colorsonmymind...its feels great to know that you got here something you needed ..
I live with chronic pain and yes, I do feel it. I haven't really explored it too much, been running from it mostly. I will consider really feeling it. I love transformation.
Thanks for visiting my blog!
My Moscow friend. Unfortunately very true again..(but beautiful :-)
Well done, Abhay! And what a beautiful photo to accompany your poem!
Hi Spooky Suzie,
Welcome to I&U..and thank you so much for thinking about my poem and what it tries to say...actually here by pain i meant the pain from the rigidities, authoritarianism, injustice, a sense of being deprived of something or the other..
Hi DA,
you are so honest in your comments all the times...
Hi Tara,
Somehow i am managing so far to do it...thank you so much..
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