A Voice (Poetry Thursday)
since long
a voice has been hidden
deep inside my heart
waiting to speak
so everyone could listen
the voice
so deep
the voice
so rich
the voice
so warm
the voice
so calm
since long
a voice has been hidden
deep inside my heart
waiting to speak
so evryone could listen
the ennui of existence
the emptiness of ether
the echo of entrapment
the end of eternity
since long
a voice has been hidden
deep inside my heart
waiting to speak
so everyone could listen
the ancient rhymes
the silent moans
the turbulent chimes
the violent tones
since long
a voice has been hidden
deep inside my heart
waiting to speak
so everyone could listen
the sufferings of the man
the sufferings of the"Gaia*"
the sufferings of the living
the sufferings of the dead
since long ...since very long
a voice has been hidden
deep inside my heart
waiting to speak
so everyone could listen
the joys of a child
the bloom of a bud
the love of a mother
the warm rays of the Sun!~
* The Living Planet
posted by White Square at
2:51 pm
11 Comments:
the repition works quite well in your poem
it is lovely
As Lady Wordsmith says, I like the repetition very much.
I love any poem that has "ennui" used in it successfully! Nice job (adn great photo)
I love the way you use repetiton. A heart felt and lovely poem.
love-bd
Good heartfelt poem and wonderful photo.
Beautiful! Set the voice free and let it speak and sing!
hello abhay, i guess i liked the most the contradiction that even though the voice wants to talk for so much time and someone would expect that u as the writer could make the poem have a different tone to express that anxiety, u keep it slow and easy going...
Woohoo , you're on a roll! Good work.
Cheers
Glenn
well deserve praise from the frnds
but more exploration is wht i expect from u.anyways u got the pitch good work...
I like this stanza:
"the ennui of existence
the emptiness of ether
the echo of entrapment
the end of eternity"
Thank you Gel so much!
They are my favorite lines too!
Cheers!
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