Thursday, 23 November 2006

I would not speak of love(Poetry Thursday)


i would not speak of love
that runs in my veins
nourishing every cell
of my existence
rather i would cherish
in silence
the fruits of love

the sweetest pain that fills
every pore of my self
in the absence of my love
and the ecstacy and the excitement
of hearing her voice
of having a glance
even for while
even ...even for a fraction of time...

9 Comments:

Anonymous my backyard said...

Nice poem. I like the image of love running in veins."

23/11/06 10:51 pm  
Blogger rachana said...

quite a 'silent' expression of love!! but as they say you have to express it with words at times!

24/11/06 8:24 pm  
Blogger Atyllah said...

Your love poetry is so sweet, so gentle, so beautiful - lucky lover :-)

24/11/06 10:39 pm  
Blogger yioeng said...

hello abhay, even though i hate interpet poetry literally and not read behind the lines, i think it's true that when great feelings overwhelm us, we can't find the words to explain what is this we feel...
only when we get the chance and luxury to take this little step aside and actually see the state we're in, we can find the words...
but i guess you do depict your feeling while being overwhelmed,well done

25/11/06 1:44 am  
Blogger soulless said...

Especially adored the first few lines:

i would not speak of love
that runs in my veins
nourishing every cell
of my existence
rather i would cherish
in silence


Be blessed, dear. ^_^

25/11/06 4:53 pm  
Blogger Susan Abraham said...

A sweet tender poem, Abhay.

27/11/06 7:04 am  
Blogger Omni said...

Lovely!! :-)

27/11/06 4:15 pm  
Blogger writerwoman said...

Love the imagery that comes from the words
the sweetest pain.

That part was my favorite.

Sara

6/12/06 10:01 pm  
Blogger abhay k said...

Hi Sara,
Thank you so much for your lovely words!
Cheers!

6/12/06 10:32 pm  

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